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[Story] Forsaken, but not Forgotten - Chapter 1: Breach of Darkness
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Morec0
Hmm, looks good. I'm looking forward to more.
And yeah, my story is excellent.
Post by
Orranis
That's really good! I like the dialogue and how the character relationships are weird. I thought at first that "a pain in the butt" seemed too uncharacteristic (I still think that the butt was unnecessary). I love the Forsaken, especially the Forgotten Shadow cult. Only one problem. I'm not sure how big the church was in a Mage controlled city such as Dalaran. Perhaps he grew up there before moving, and wants to see it again for nostalgic undeath reasons.
Edit:
Yes, I know I'm perfect.
Post by
Monday
Hmm, looks good. I'm looking forward to more.
And yeah, my story is excellent.
Braggart!
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218246
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Post by
Aimsyr
Looks great, you written any more?
really enjoyed reading it ;)
Post by
Anmity
I really liked this! Looking forward to more! :)
Post by
Random0008
This story is amazing. Damn be the person who says otherwise.
Post by
Xoriouz
This story is amazing. Damn be the person who says otherwise.
... Damnit!
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